Should parents be responsible if their children behave badly?

Many countries have problem with children. Because of their parents are not responsibilities. However if their parents had responsibilities, children would not have a lot of crimes. And this essay will discuss why parents should be responsible if their children behave badly.

Normally behavior in children depends on the child's age, personality, and physical and emotional development. That mean parents must supervise their child when they still young, because when they young they don’t know which one is good or bad.



And it will be involved in many crimes when they are teenager. Refer to Khaosod online news told teenage gang beset the policeman when he tried to hold back. We can see when children with out parents control. Many crimes and social problem are begun by children.



After these I will show how about children under control of parents have many good things happen too. Example sportsmen at the Olympic game have parents support and sponsor. It made them feel firm and feel sure to win.



Anyway if parents have responsibility, the social will better. And then many crimes will not happen a lot like this time.

Difficault Words


Responsibilities(N)=รับผิดชอบ, รู้จักความรับผิดชอบ
Responsible(adj)=รับผิดชอบ, รู้จักความรับผิดชอบ
Crimes(N)=ความผิดทางอาญา, ความผิดมหันต์
Behave(V)=ความประพฤติ
Support=สนับสนุน
Sponsor=สนับสนุน
Sportmen=นักกีฬา
Beset=รุม
Hold back=ระงับ

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